tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7343307086361633411.post7315576183525313308..comments2009-10-16T09:35:28.280-04:00Comments on The 003 Grammar Review Blog: An example of a narrative speechNina Liakoshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04497100531617971306noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7343307086361633411.post-35811264368103583782009-10-16T09:35:28.280-04:002009-10-16T09:35:28.280-04:00"Swallows" is a plural noun in this case..."Swallows" is a plural noun in this case. William is correct. Thanks for your input! :-)Nina Liakoshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04497100531617971306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7343307086361633411.post-62544350929084096262009-10-15T22:43:37.443-04:002009-10-15T22:43:37.443-04:00I could be swallows in sentence "Only three s...I could be swallows in sentence "Only three swallows of nsima for each one of us."<br /><br />It should be swallowed.<br /><br />I'm not sure.<br /><br />>_____<Akamehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01800571623893138663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7343307086361633411.post-23136840559639522262009-10-15T12:25:16.297-04:002009-10-15T12:25:16.297-04:00@Fahad, welcome to the blogosphere!
@Rie, you have...@Fahad, welcome to the blogosphere!<br />@Rie, you have found some mistakes but in other cases, William was correct.<br />"...started lining up" is correct. Good for you!<br /><br />"the poor" = "people who are poor" (William was correct.)<br /><br />"The food passed....We dropped down...": These are correct--good for you! Note the double 'p' in 'dropped'.<br /><br />"I was determined to...receive education" is correct as William said it. "To be determined to V" means to want something so much that you will not accept failure. William wanted an education so much that he would do anything to get it.<br /><br />"Using a bicycle frame..." is a participial phrase dependent on the main clause, "I built my machine." This is correct as William said it.<br /><br />Thanks, as always, for reading the 003 Grammar Blog!Nina Liakoshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04497100531617971306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7343307086361633411.post-55011579584822118562009-10-14T18:55:17.516-04:002009-10-14T18:55:17.516-04:00this is Rie.
I found these mistakes,but I'm no...this is Rie.<br />I found these mistakes,but I'm not sure about some of them.<br /><br />Queues of people start linging up<br />→started<br />and the poor<br />→they are poor<br />the food passes<br />→passed<br />we drop down to nothing <br />→droped <br />I was ditermined to do <br />→I ditermined <br />Using bicycle frame<br />→usedRiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17178534002669446511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7343307086361633411.post-67091656895761909722009-10-14T12:00:27.674-04:002009-10-14T12:00:27.674-04:00I'm Fahad.I'm Fahad.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com